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Re: Marineair
Thanks buddy - I had a feeling you would like this one :D
posted by
lionreign
on September 9, 2008 at 11:21 AM
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This one is fantastic, Neal!
Bleed as I have bled
Before you claim to understand me
Great lines....
posted by
Marineair
on September 8, 2008 at 11:24 PM
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Re: Sinome
Thanks - this one was not the easiest to write, so I am especially glad to see such great comments on it
posted by
lionreign
on September 4, 2008 at 7:14 AM
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Re: Sam
Thanks - this one is the result of a lot of hard work on behalf of my unpaid editor (who is also my muse) but i am pleased with the result.
Glad you liked it
posted by
lionreign
on September 4, 2008 at 7:10 AM
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Re: callista
and yet we should understand our own reasons and still we have trouble forgiving ourselves
posted by
lionreign
on September 4, 2008 at 7:06 AM
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Re: purple Mermaid
thanks - this poem was actually written to me...
posted by
lionreign
on September 4, 2008 at 6:04 AM
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Excellent my friend... An amazing poem full of passion and feeling. Loved it!
posted by
Sinome
on September 3, 2008 at 9:49 PM
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Poignant, look me in the eyes carries so much imagery within the scope of this awesome poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 3, 2008 at 3:38 PM
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Well written and a different view of forgiveness, if we could really understand and comprehend why someone has done something, there may be no forgiveness necessary. Very good indeed.
posted by
jeansaw
on September 3, 2008 at 3:30 PM
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hmnnn strong message my dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on September 3, 2008 at 2:30 AM
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