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Whoa! Speechless.
posted by
Mystereo
on January 11, 2009 at 6:10 PM
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WOW
that's about all I can say....
posted by
mejustme
on September 3, 2008 at 9:24 AM
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This was written with so much passion and conviction that i could feel it.
It was if you were standing in front of me and the words just tumbled out. very good.
posted by
jeansaw
on September 1, 2008 at 7:35 AM
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The poem is not about what you believe in, it is about don't pound into the ground what I believe in. The poem is about don't blame me for your wet suit when it is you that jumped into the swimming pool on your own free will. Thank you for your ohh 2 cent worth just the same.
posted by
RITE2SPIN
on September 1, 2008 at 7:04 AM
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I do not believe in heaven or hell. I agree with Purple Mermaid, religions are not wrong - people are.
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on September 1, 2008 at 12:42 AM
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This is well written and passionate. I don't k now who this advocate is but I am scared
posted by
Sinome
on August 31, 2008 at 9:13 PM
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I just know some people who hide behind their religions to clothe themselves with dignity underneath their screaming hypocrisy...religions are never wrong...people are dear
... strong and profound words in this poetry....
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 31, 2008 at 7:49 PM
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Good poetry.........
but leaves me curious...what is your 'religion' ?
posted by
WaterKat
on August 31, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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hmmmmmmm
posted by
Star5_
on August 31, 2008 at 6:42 PM
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I liked 'I do not condemn you, you condemn yourself.' Enough said, fine point! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 31, 2008 at 6:13 PM
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Strong words of reprimand and excellent tribute to trhe truth of God. Write on Nathan!
posted by
merkie
on August 31, 2008 at 2:43 PM
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No matter who's ...
... wrong or ... what's wrong ... or right ... if we can leave condemnation and violence behind we could one day reach peace and respect etc ... but ... it'll be difficult -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on August 31, 2008 at 1:32 PM
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