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Amazing read what would we find if the curtain is down, great creativity.
Not posting just reading yet, work is post White Rose 4th poem 3rd page. Thank you i'll continue to read.
posted by
Mystereo
on January 11, 2009 at 6:07 PM
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I loved the part about the curtain, lies and deception and how people
don't always read between the lines or let themselves become deceived. You are an advocate-----God's advocate.
posted by
jeansaw
on September 1, 2008 at 7:43 AM
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Some strong thoughts and beliefs.....
posted by
Troosha
on August 31, 2008 at 7:20 AM
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RITE2SPIN
This is food today, I needed to read it. It is totally profound. Thank you and God bless.
posted by
Justi
on August 31, 2008 at 12:07 AM
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The curtain falls and each veiwer is experiencing their own truth but you sum up everything with your final choice of belief. God's love is grace!
posted by
merkie
on August 30, 2008 at 6:31 PM
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Wonderful poem! I like this line very much:
know if the truth is what you seek and what you really want to find So profound. sam
posted by
sam444
on August 30, 2008 at 12:24 PM
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The last sentence took me to a different seat to sit and think.......
posted by
Star5_
on August 30, 2008 at 8:52 AM
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