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There is great flow and harmony in this poem .
posted by
afzal50
on August 30, 2008 at 6:33 AM
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Never JUST "whispers in the wind" or "shadows in the night", they were real, and important and lasting part of life that helped to mold and make you what you are.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 30, 2008 at 5:59 AM
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how could you write something so sad
...so beautiful...
If I could only reach out and touch your heart...
Bless you dear one...and all that may have been causing the hurt...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 30, 2008 at 12:30 AM
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Heart aches of love, so sad and reaching out are these lines of love. Wow.
posted by
yellowrose55
on August 29, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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Oh, my heart aches! I thought this line to be so representative of lost within the realm we exist: Have I gone so far that I've forgotten who I am?,
Are you doing okay!? I remain vigilant! Love to you sam
posted by
sam444
on August 29, 2008 at 9:35 PM
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So sad and beautiful
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 29, 2008 at 5:48 PM
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Sinome, very poignant and touching...
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posted by
Rumor
on August 29, 2008 at 5:33 PM
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So very sad and touching
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 29, 2008 at 4:02 PM
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Aww Sinome..I'm speechless! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on August 29, 2008 at 2:10 PM
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We never know tomorrow ...
... not even the next second and ... it's so important to take care of here and now, let go when gone and take responsibility for what happens in our own life whether it's a beginning or a departure ... afterwards we may see the wisdom in the reason ...
Excellent written ! - - genio
posted by
ggXpress
on August 29, 2008 at 1:44 PM
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Wow!Probably a difficult subject for both writer and reader, but kind of blew my socks off.
posted by
jfm32
on August 29, 2008 at 11:28 AM
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So very beautiful .Heartwrenching emotions. Hugs for you.
posted by
merkie
on August 29, 2008 at 9:27 AM
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oh my sinome!
posted by
Star5_
on August 29, 2008 at 7:16 AM
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