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Chills and goosebumps of pure joy in reading your poem. Your words
are magic--just like you. Kris
posted by
ChristianHorrorWriter
on August 28, 2008 at 3:05 PM
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I really love your poetry. It's beautiful.
posted by
GALACTUS_
on August 28, 2008 at 11:35 AM
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Ohh, this marvelous and motivating work!
I feel invigorated to keep on going!
posted by
Katray2
on August 28, 2008 at 11:24 AM
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You never know what happens when ...
... you don't fight, as the wise tells, then you never know if it's right or wrong if you fight and believe in fighting ... but, as we know ... it's too much fight in this world ... is it right ? -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on August 28, 2008 at 10:46 AM
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cool picture and poem
posted by
Lanetay
on August 28, 2008 at 10:30 AM
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Purple
Certainly a message we should all remember when we're feeling defeating - that we all have the capacity to rise above. Well done!
posted by
Troosha
on August 28, 2008 at 9:06 AM
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Forgive me my dear Jen
I simply cannot find the right words to express my feelings on reading this poem; eloquence, beauty, passion and fierce emotions all of this and more; many blessings my friend and thanks always
posted by
mariaki
on August 28, 2008 at 3:39 AM
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Nice! Very inspiring
posted by
resurrectionman
on August 28, 2008 at 12:56 AM
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Purple, the sweetie, you have left me speechless. What word felicity! what purity!! what from the depths of the heart, and what elevating!!! Amazing dear friend, amazing. All of these combine in your beauty. I am so very happy to find a brave and assured Mermaid speaking from the top of the tower.
, and whatever else there can be.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 27, 2008 at 10:29 PM
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Jen you never cease to amaze me. What a beautiful poem Thank you sweetie for the wonderful gift that is you.
posted by
Sinome
on August 27, 2008 at 9:44 PM
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breath taking
thoughts and picture
posted by
YBSP1
on August 27, 2008 at 9:03 PM
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