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What an unusual piece my dear Sinome
I have to admit to being guilty of being one these ignorant passers by; although we don't see this phenomenon here too often; many blessings and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on August 28, 2008 at 3:07 AM
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That is just an amazingly thought provoking poem...
love how you took the initial description and then put it in context. Superb work.
posted by
resurrectionman
on August 28, 2008 at 1:28 AM
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A forgotten "wild flower", the beauty that they bring, always touching someone. Lovely poem. I think of the Bible where the Lilies of the field are mentioned
posted by
yellowrose55
on August 27, 2008 at 10:22 PM
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The pain of the yellow flower on the roadside, yellow,signficant also, poetically, is brought out in a most memorable flow of the feeling, and why we must be considerate to fellow-beings who lie anywhere you'll find, in roadside dwellings. This poem of today's is wonderfully cathartic, so ocean-kissed princess-like
xoxo.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 27, 2008 at 10:19 PM
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extraordinaire....such a gift from your heart's ink...beautiful my dear!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 27, 2008 at 10:12 PM
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Wow! This can be taken so many ways. An analogy of life was one for me. But to take the poem for face value I am astonished. I love to pick your brain one day! I love the flow of your imagery but it more how you see the world around you that warms my heart so! I love your imagery! It gets my brain rolling! Yes for me darlin'! Love you! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 27, 2008 at 9:38 PM
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simplicty
yellow flower, all alone; not anymore; you noticed.
posted by
YBSP1
on August 27, 2008 at 9:12 PM
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so sad
posted by
Lanetay
on August 27, 2008 at 7:32 PM
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I think
I caught a glimpse. ahh yes.
Roses
from me
and you know who!
=^..^=
posted by
Whacky
on August 27, 2008 at 7:26 PM
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Thanks for the interest...
I'll send the book buying info to your e-mail
Max
posted by
contagion_publishing
on August 27, 2008 at 7:19 PM
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blessed you are
posted by
lestate7
on August 27, 2008 at 7:13 PM
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This is so sad!
Beautiful but sad.
posted by
Bel_
on August 27, 2008 at 7:09 PM
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That was lovely Sinome. Reminds us to notice the beautiful things around us, for they can be fleeting.
posted by
sfcookingpoet
on August 27, 2008 at 4:59 PM
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Sinome
Ah, but you noticed. 
posted by
Troosha
on August 27, 2008 at 4:28 PM
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Such a sad tale...poor little flower
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 27, 2008 at 4:14 PM
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