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Re: Sam
Thanks Sam... I went through a less cheerful phase for a bit - this was one of the results
posted by
lionreign
on August 26, 2008 at 6:55 AM
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Re: Luz
Thanks - that transition was really the first wave of inspiration for this poem
posted by
lionreign
on August 26, 2008 at 3:15 AM
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Re: Troosha
Ever noticed how they always appear when they are really needed?
posted by
lionreign
on August 26, 2008 at 3:02 AM
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Re: Passionate and so well written !
Thanks afzal
posted by
lionreign
on August 26, 2008 at 3:00 AM
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I was captured by the poignant questioning and enamored with the response /answer with no pain, no gain and led so beautifully to an exquisite ending. The need to need is wonderful! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 23, 2008 at 7:54 AM
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my favorite part is the switch from "no pain, no gain" to "no gain, no pain." it says much.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 22, 2008 at 5:03 PM
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Thank goodness for those
gentle lights of hope 
posted by
Troosha
on August 22, 2008 at 9:15 AM
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Passionate and so well written !
posted by
afzal50
on August 22, 2008 at 6:37 AM
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