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Thanks I was kind of worried about that.

posted by DRKnight on August 23, 2008 at 10:12 PM | link to this | reply

i wonder if Brenn's going to be trouble. that's where things seem to be going. also, kudos on writing a detailed but non-vulgar sex scene. it wasn't fluff and it wasn't smut either. Good job

posted by Luz_Briar on August 22, 2008 at 8:19 PM | link to this | reply