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but i don't know if thier system auto double spaces
They tell you to double space it. i talked with a girl on the phone who said they probably don't get that technical.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 21, 2008 at 12:34 PM
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Sunny
thx but i panicked and sent it because i didn't want to lose the whole thing. i do the i's on purpose and the commas was weird but i liked it. i guess there were more mistakes than i thought.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 21, 2008 at 12:32 PM
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Capital at the beginning of I've (first sentence)
Fourth line down... get their early 
got there
Capitalize all of your I's when referring to yourself.
Misunderstanding is missing an n
Capitalize Rick
Add end quotes to ricks statement
Capitalize You're in "you're ugly"... it's a complete sentence.... same for "You're not welcome..."
You use a lot of commas, especially in the beginning. Maybe add a few periods instead? Otherwise it reads like an incredibly long sentence.
Not sure if this is what you were looking for, but hope this helped.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 21, 2008 at 11:25 AM
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Pat...When using blogit...it automatically double spaces
Hold "shift" and press enter twice...to double space.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 21, 2008 at 11:12 AM
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