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this poem is so deep....I could identify with so many feelings in it
posted by
mejustme
on August 21, 2008 at 2:48 PM
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Purple Mermaid
Dear lady your poetry is so deep and painful sometimes I want to cry for and with you. You are a precious lady.
posted by
Justi
on August 21, 2008 at 12:39 PM
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some days it just feel that way
posted by
Lanetay
on August 21, 2008 at 12:11 PM
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Very moving
And familiar, some of those feelings and thoughts. I hope expressing them helps. Maybe you could let me know; I might want to try it.
posted by
mousehop
on August 21, 2008 at 11:01 AM
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Very good! Too often, we fall for the lie that God caused our misfortunes! Hi, Purple M!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on August 21, 2008 at 8:38 AM
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Keep your spirits high. Lovely poem. Its true, sometime we forsake ourselves.
posted by
Pedro88
on August 21, 2008 at 6:49 AM
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You have such a beautiful creation with your words filled with emotions.
You had so described life with Fibromiagia, Sending Light and Love to you and all you minister to. May your Blessed many timesove.
posted by
skye08
on August 21, 2008 at 6:27 AM
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Highly touching and painful pleading ...
posted by
afzal50
on August 21, 2008 at 5:46 AM
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Jen sweetie
I don't know what and how many demons you are battling with my friend; I can only send my prayers and love to aid you; never fear though whether you feel it or not He is always there for you; all you have to do is ask; many blessings braveheart and thanks
posted by
mariaki
on August 21, 2008 at 4:09 AM
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So many uncanny feelings torment us...
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 20, 2008 at 9:30 PM
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That is very moving...
... and I hope it means that you're seeing the support and love that exists for you.
posted by
resurrectionman
on August 20, 2008 at 9:20 PM
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Dear Jen
C'mon lady, what happened? It saddens me to see all this. Be brave, and fight back if you have to. What has hurt you so much, and how can anyone do that? Had this not been there, it is, I admit, a beautiful, beautiful poem, so prayer-like. Please, do not decide anything in haste. Blessings & Love.
F I G H T!!! that's my message.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 20, 2008 at 9:09 PM
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Such a beautiful prayer Jen. I can't believe what is happening ... I can't even understand it, you got
. Beautiful poem!!!!
posted by
Sinome
on August 20, 2008 at 7:54 PM
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