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no. I just liked your first lines...caught my attention?

posted by shelly_b on August 20, 2008 at 6:30 PM | link to this | reply

um, weak finish?

posted by Sudanym_ on August 20, 2008 at 6:16 PM | link to this | reply

Strong words at the beginning there.

posted by shelly_b on August 20, 2008 at 5:30 PM | link to this | reply