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That was enchanting, Merkie! Loved it!

posted by Katray2 on August 22, 2008 at 12:52 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful ...

posted by afzal50 on August 21, 2008 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely haiku my dear.....
thanks for stopping by much appreciated; many blessings and thanks

posted by mariaki on August 21, 2008 at 3:22 AM | link to this | reply

So beautiful Merkie... so suggestive... One of the best and sweetest Haikus I have read in here.  Bravo!

posted by Sinome on August 20, 2008 at 7:57 PM | link to this | reply

I saw a woman in the stillness of her grief alone on the beach with broken dreams....awesome work!

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on August 20, 2008 at 6:03 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful! I love this line: Lost in fragrant dreams. What a brilliant close!  sam

posted by sam444 on August 20, 2008 at 2:52 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice, Marie

posted by Kayzzaman on August 20, 2008 at 11:08 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful, merkie.
If I found a rose upon the sand along the beach, I would smile.

posted by TAPS. on August 20, 2008 at 9:52 AM | link to this | reply