Go to Everyman's
- Add a comment
- Go to Resting in A Bird's Nest
I love it....
posted by
mejustme
on August 19, 2008 at 8:13 PM
| link to this | reply
you're an excellent poet, kaz. this one was enthralling from start to finish.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 19, 2008 at 6:20 PM
| link to this | reply
Such an ending in futillity made it so poignant! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on August 19, 2008 at 6:08 PM
| link to this | reply
i didn't get it but don't feel bad i didn't get most of the poems i read today. Somehow i still found it interesting and moving anyway.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 19, 2008 at 12:50 PM
| link to this | reply
i didn't get it but don't fel bad i didn't get most of the poems i read today. Somewho i still founding iit nteresting and moving anyway.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 19, 2008 at 12:48 PM
| link to this | reply
pinky and the brain
sounds like an episode of my favorite cartoon. " how i miss those guys"
posted by
YBSP1
on August 19, 2008 at 12:46 PM
| link to this | reply
I am amused.
This is endearing. Thank you
posted by
poetperson
on August 19, 2008 at 12:03 PM
| link to this | reply
A birds nest of sorrow is not very restful. I like the ending as realization of that being futility. Good write Kazz as long we are here this is our home and shelter is the question mark ?
posted by
merkie
on August 19, 2008 at 10:28 AM
| link to this | reply
Moving poem Kaizz. Amazing metaphors and haunting images. There is so much pain veiled in your verses and yet throughout I felt your conviction that this is not all there is, that belief should be comforting...shouldn't it? It will pass my friend, everything does eventually. Hang on and be strong
posted by
Sinome
on August 19, 2008 at 8:11 AM
| link to this | reply
despair and depression needing rest
posted by
Ariala
on August 19, 2008 at 4:53 AM
| link to this | reply