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It is still a wonderful poem to read! I love the message!  sam

posted by sam444 on August 19, 2008 at 7:48 PM | link to this | reply

i understand
suppose they are waiting for you to say a simple i love you

posted by YBSP1 on August 19, 2008 at 12:09 PM | link to this | reply

Flowing with the poetic heartbeat of loves calling.Flower

posted by yellowrose55 on August 18, 2008 at 11:23 PM | link to this | reply

This is very dynamic! I liked the opposites entangled in a simple request! Well done indeed! sam

posted by sam444 on August 18, 2008 at 8:10 PM | link to this | reply

So sad... and beautiful...  you are not asking for too much... but tell him,   sometimes one needs to say things out loud.  Silence is worse than yelling... Tell him what you need. 

posted by Sinome on August 18, 2008 at 5:32 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Marineair on August 18, 2008 at 3:57 PM | link to this | reply