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Excellent wording, my friend
posted by
b00mah
on August 18, 2008 at 11:37 AM
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NIce!
Excellent
posted by
b00mah
on August 18, 2008 at 11:36 AM
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Emotional imagery, leaves me thinking.
posted by
merkie
on August 18, 2008 at 9:30 AM
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sounds like a good battle of the strong stuff and sitting on a beach
under the moon and the stars and sharing one's feelings with a good friend or once upon a time lover.
posted by
Kabu
on August 18, 2008 at 8:19 AM
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Kayzz
A strong and poignant piece!!!
posted by
Troosha
on August 18, 2008 at 8:13 AM
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poignant is the word!
your words are pressure against my throat. i love your poem! 
posted by
pelagus
on August 18, 2008 at 5:51 AM
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I love the imagery
not a scene I would have thought of - very clever.
posted by
lionreign
on August 18, 2008 at 1:35 AM
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Great work
A very poignant piece.
posted by
NylaNani
on August 18, 2008 at 12:45 AM
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