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Bravo this poem I really enjoyed reading deep on the of great and awsome.
posted by
Mystereo
on December 6, 2008 at 5:58 PM
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I liked the kernel too and this
: I search through the wheat and discard the chaff, This was fantastic! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 16, 2008 at 9:25 PM
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That kernal that makes us laugh adds sublime to the struggle.
posted by
merkie
on August 16, 2008 at 8:00 PM
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Mentalis Juris
Hi Deborah. Do we work you that hard? Sorry about that. We do depend on you, and we do appreciate all of your hard work. Keep smiling, and keep writing your poems. They are a joy to all of us. They make us smile.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on August 16, 2008 at 7:57 PM
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all it takes is a spark good work
posted by
spinner
on August 16, 2008 at 4:34 PM
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posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 16, 2008 at 4:08 PM
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This is a fantastic composition that's much deeper than first glance. From your lyrical cadence, your reference to Lewis Carroll's classic, and even your choice of font, you've taken measures to ensure a completeness to your post. I applaud you; very nicely done.
posted by
Marineair
on August 16, 2008 at 2:51 PM
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and that is what is all about isn't it...finding that "small kernel that will make us lalugh" Beautiful poem... you are very talented my friend
posted by
Sinome
on August 16, 2008 at 1:57 PM
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