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well written! I like the unprecedented twist at the end dear...you must have been half-conscious the whole time...not realizing the full scenario. You held me captive til the end...great job!



posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 15, 2008 at 10:25 PM
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Get the warmth out of your heart
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 15, 2008 at 4:56 AM
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