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well written! I like the unprecedented twist at the end dear...you must have been half-conscious the whole time...not realizing the full scenario. You held me captive til the end...great job!

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on August 15, 2008 at 10:25 PM | link to this | reply

Get the warmth out of your heart

posted by Kayzzaman on August 15, 2008 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply