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Strange and abrupt twist...
posted by
Marineair
on August 16, 2008 at 12:43 AM
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Gosh when will these bombing sprees stop?
posted by
Straightforward
on August 15, 2008 at 6:54 PM
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Like other comments - I didn't see that coming. Brought a tear to my eye - sad but true. Nice writing.
posted by
Trene
on August 15, 2008 at 5:00 AM
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Very nice but I would suggest you shorter lines
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 15, 2008 at 4:40 AM
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OMG!
oh dear, I didnt see that coming...I was crushed! I dont know what to say...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 15, 2008 at 12:51 AM
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