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You bring so much emotions to ...
... the surface - that's good - that's healing -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on August 16, 2008 at 11:18 AM
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Sinome
Writing is such a wonderful release. Your thoughts in this poem sadden me, but your outlook inspires me.
posted by
Hilow
on August 15, 2008 at 9:16 AM
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Hold on to that memory
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 15, 2008 at 8:15 AM
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Writing is Power
"Write on!"
posted by
Kolekshuns
on August 15, 2008 at 8:09 AM
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Sinome
I can't remember who it was that said 'When your heart is heavy it overflows', and you turn that overflow into poetry...
posted by
Nautikos
on August 15, 2008 at 6:16 AM
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Hi there, my ocean kissed sands, princess Marta
I must commend you for the soulful poems you write and the way you can leave people gasping the way you close is something that I find brilliant in you. Kudos!
from your desert prince xoxo.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 15, 2008 at 6:03 AM
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Wonderfully written
this beautiful piece will have all writers empathising with you, as I suspect we all use our poetry to find out how we feel about things sometimes.
As for love, I don't believe it requires trust or even that they love you too, these are just things we would prefer to have in place as well to limit the probability that we will be hurt.
posted by
lionreign
on August 15, 2008 at 3:45 AM
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i like to read you--yours reads to me -and this one i read at a very good time- alot said in what seems long-but really it is quick--
posted by
bumpsinaroad
on August 14, 2008 at 6:35 PM
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This is wonderful! I like to write when the world seems heavy! The imagery is stunning and the meaning touches me deeply! I especially liked:
I smile... and just feel...
for this one memory I can keep.What an exceptional way to end a poem of this magnitude. I say brilliant! Love to you Sinome! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 14, 2008 at 3:24 PM
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They say feelings are a writer's greatest inspiration, but when I'm drowned by a multitude of them, I can't write either. I feel too suffocated, pulled into many ways. Its too hard to focus. But writing does help me work out and understand for myseld, the "whys" in the world. Such an amazing poem. The saddest thing is when we only have memories to hold on to. Beautiful poem.
posted by
serendipity09
on August 14, 2008 at 7:40 AM
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this can be very sad...but so inspiring at the same time my beloved marta...the essence of remembering beautiful memories of someone so special vo matter how sad can lift a smile in one's heart...as to yours my dear...and you said it so beautifully inspiring....may you find peace and happiness one like you so deserve my dear.
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 14, 2008 at 3:14 AM
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Memories...and dreaming...
Nothing wrong with that.
While you dream, reach for the stars...have everything you want.
Love is not so easily turned off, by lack of trust. We can't help what we feel, we don't get to be "in charge".
You just have to make the best of it, till happiness smiles on you again.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 13, 2008 at 9:33 PM
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Your sadness is a shadow and your memory a precious light. Balance these with care and write more. It helps!
posted by
merkie
on August 13, 2008 at 8:02 PM
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This is so sad......and even though this has nothing to do with painful, yet sweet memories...one of my poems came into my head with the reading of yours, that I thought was a good answer to the pain. Here's the link, if you'd like to see it:
Theft
posted by
NiteTide
on August 13, 2008 at 7:48 PM
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Memories are good to keep
as long as they stay in their place.
posted by
Bel_
on August 13, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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