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To respond to your intro to these series, I beg to differ. One does not
always have to be sincere to be romantic. There is also something called planned romance or betting romance, which again is not spontaneous. What say?
posted by
Straightforward
on August 13, 2008 at 9:48 AM
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Romance - so much tougher to write than people might think
You have done a great job at fleshing out and adding dimension to your characters. I felt connected to them, because you showed me so many sides of their minds and hearts I felt like I was discovering "real people". I think maybe if you did the same with some of the settings your characters find themselves in then the whole story might become that much more vivid. I had a good time reading about the ups and downs of falling in and out (and in one more time) of love.
Keep it going, I want to see where this ends up.
posted by
BahamaDave
on August 13, 2008 at 8:18 AM
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