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Re: Sign
Well stated. Great poem to evoke those special emotions

posted by b00mah on August 14, 2008 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply

Sign
Well

posted by b00mah on August 14, 2008 at 10:30 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, Marta!

I wrote it while my youngest daughter was tooling around Menlo Mall with her friends and while a major electrical storm was going on outside.  There were some cushioned seats across from the jewelers where I had browsed almost a year ago, which prompted my somber reflections.

posted by cpklapper on August 13, 2008 at 6:18 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written Carl.  Loved the images it evoked and the veiled sadness in it.  Great poem!

posted by Sinome on August 12, 2008 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply