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wow!...Mermaid, very powerful and sensual...
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posted by
Rumor
on August 12, 2008 at 4:55 PM
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Purple
So much passion -
posted by
Hilow
on August 12, 2008 at 2:29 PM
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A stirring and powerful ...
... poem ... uniting love and sexuality can burst beyond imagination - I belive that's a strong reason that the urge for giving in to love, with sex as a guide is one of the deepest needs in all of us. To completely surrender makes us vulnerable and might be scary but, the 'reward' can give the highest fruit -
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on August 12, 2008 at 2:19 PM
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Oh what a bravo feeling love! With TLC, "Top of the Stairs"
posted by
BC-A
on August 12, 2008 at 12:38 PM
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That was powerful and the last sentence made it much more so.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 12, 2008 at 9:08 AM
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So sensual and beautiful
Amazing how much you can put into a few words and a little imagination
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 12, 2008 at 8:45 AM
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sensual. nice, in many ways
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 12, 2008 at 6:40 AM
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Wonderful piece my dear Jen
so full of passion and longing; beautiful emotions; many blessings and thanks my friend; take care of you always
posted by
mariaki
on August 12, 2008 at 4:13 AM
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This was fantastic ans so sensual that I simply loved the force of it
Roaring over the sexuality of my nerves
Cascading fierce spasm
Powering my plea for sensual entry
Well done my Purple Jen
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 11, 2008 at 11:57 PM
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sips
posted by
Smittenheimer
on August 11, 2008 at 9:50 PM
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So very sensual, Jen...
Nice work!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 11, 2008 at 9:27 PM
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enjoyed
posted by
Samantha39
on August 11, 2008 at 7:45 PM
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must of been some words spoken
posted by
Lanetay
on August 11, 2008 at 7:33 PM
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posted by
mejustme
on August 11, 2008 at 6:58 PM
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