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I enjoy how you make feel use of the environment in your dialog and everything! With TLC, BCA, "Top of the Stairs"
posted by
BC-A
on August 12, 2008 at 1:31 PM
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glad to see you doing great here now dear...just as I believed your wonderful work deserves an audience. Bravo!


posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 12, 2008 at 12:05 AM
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Just read this bit in your sequel and it was captivating!
posted by
Straightforward
on August 11, 2008 at 6:22 PM
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This is really good.
The words just seem to flow...I wish I could write like that.



posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 11, 2008 at 3:31 PM
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