Comments on Religion In Pirate's Wells (Short Story) Part 2c

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 I enjoy how you make feel use of the environment in your dialog and everything! With TLC, BCA, "Top of the Stairs"

posted by BC-A on August 12, 2008 at 1:31 PM | link to this | reply

glad to see you doing great here now dear...just as I believed your wonderful work deserves an audience. Bravo!

posted by __Purple_Mermaid11__ on August 12, 2008 at 12:05 AM | link to this | reply

Just read this bit in your sequel and it was captivating!

posted by Straightforward on August 11, 2008 at 6:22 PM | link to this | reply

This is really good.
The words just seem to flow...I wish I could write like that.

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on August 11, 2008 at 3:31 PM | link to this | reply