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enjoyed this so much, very, very good.
posted by
jeansaw
on August 14, 2008 at 9:02 PM
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This reminds me of a guy I used to feel this way about.
Great writing.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on August 10, 2008 at 10:14 PM
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Tell me Why
A beautiful exploration of love and friendship. Very well done
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on August 10, 2008 at 8:38 PM
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Very touching!
posted by
Nautikos
on August 10, 2008 at 7:54 PM
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been there done that
posted by
Lanetay
on August 10, 2008 at 3:58 PM
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Hello Sinome! I was so taken with this poem! I have been missing an old friend and this expressed everything for me. It is amazing how the time slips by and suddenly they come to mind for no particular reason. This line was great resolution for me:
friendship , of all those kinds...is the sweetest one.
It was indeed one of those friendships! Have a wonderful day and my blessings to you.
Shelly xoxoox
[I am at my daughter's house and on her computer, it is so different than my set up. We are having a great time though. She has an outing planned for tomorrow and she is certain I will write a poem about it! I won't let her down! lol]
posted by
sam444
on August 10, 2008 at 12:15 PM
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Sinome
Some people just run for the hills when they sense love unfolding – it’s as though they fear all its complications. But in doing so they sometimes miss out on is the basics – friendship. And that’s a damn shame….
posted by
Troosha
on August 10, 2008 at 8:44 AM
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friendship is the sweetest
and often least dangerous too...

piano music in my head, Sinome

posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 10, 2008 at 6:30 AM
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Such a touching and tender poem. Loves walk is many colors, and your poem shines.


posted by
yellowrose55
on August 10, 2008 at 5:24 AM
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Lovely, very well expressed
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 10, 2008 at 5:16 AM
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sinome, I postd you on my page, because this weekend I celebrate with my
friends and it' my friend's week!!!!!!
posted by
Star5_
on August 10, 2008 at 4:56 AM
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You can never love enough. Even if you are just ment to be friends. Bitter-sweet. I know how you feel.
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 10, 2008 at 2:41 AM
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Love
I admire people who write poetry..to say so much in so few words is a miracle of heart and mind. Thank you for reminding me about Love and God. It may be one and the same but are the only things worthwhile in life...and they come in various shapes. Nevere be afraid of loving someone..even if you think it hurts...you know, love never hurts...something else does..
lots of love
posted by
Yossarian
on August 10, 2008 at 1:53 AM
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...I don't know if I should cry or sigh at this poem. Perhaps both....this was so beautifully touching...and a good reminder of all the different kinds of love...even the painful kind.
posted by
NiteTide
on August 9, 2008 at 11:49 PM
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