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Loneliness may have ...
... a purpose, for a while, or longer, and I can ask: "what's the purpose of my life - am I to be alone or ... am I to swim together with someone I can let into the world of my soul?"
I believe the longing for someone to walk along with is crucial and a part of the nature of each and all of us - and I believe it's right to face negativity (walking alone) as well as positivism (walking together with someone) - then it's easier to relax and find reason and pleasure in daily life, and for sure ... everything can happen ... - 
- genio
posted by
ggXpress
on August 10, 2008 at 1:24 PM
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Nice, very well expressed
posted by
Kayzzaman
on August 10, 2008 at 5:36 AM
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Lol - you really know how to turn a story. From a 
to a 
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Nicely done :) 
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 10, 2008 at 12:59 AM
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it had a surprise ending
posted by
Lanetay
on August 9, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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it will happen for you
how romantic...and sad it's not happened...yet
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 9, 2008 at 6:06 PM
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God, Jen...this is beautiful.
He will find you...I am sure of it. And he will be one lucky man!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 9, 2008 at 5:19 PM
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God, Jen...this is beautiful.
He will find you...I am sure of it. And he will be one lucky man!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on August 9, 2008 at 5:19 PM
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Beautiful sad poem Jen... had me entranced till the very end. Great work!
posted by
Sinome
on August 9, 2008 at 4:41 PM
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