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oop... you are on to me!!!

posted by DRKnight on August 12, 2008 at 2:09 AM | link to this | reply

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in that case, 'Christiana' is a great name for the story and the main character

posted by Luz_Briar on August 11, 2008 at 11:05 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you...

 

I don't think it is too swift... considering the story began sometime in October, and it is in this chapter March.  Theyr relationship had been long distance... she did accelerate the last part of it... because she was really begining to feel anxious that if she stayed she wouldn't  be able to do what she wanted.

And as for her religion, since she had been trying so hard to do her will, she figured she couldn't really do God's will.  This story is not a simple lesbian love story. It may be the primary focus but it is more centered on her relationship with God.


posted by DRKnight on August 11, 2008 at 1:44 AM | link to this | reply

hehe Ford Taurus. what i used to drive.

Chris is moving very swiftly into her new life. also, it does not seem she should leave her religion behind altogether. i wonder how it will all turn out.

posted by Luz_Briar on August 10, 2008 at 7:32 AM | link to this | reply

Always a pleasure to read your story :)

posted by Lotus_Flower on August 10, 2008 at 1:10 AM | link to this | reply