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Extremely well done!!!
I was captured immediately by the pacing and imagery introduced in the first two lines:
Turmoil, gargoyle, restless to start,
Bubbling, seething, bursting the heart,
- Chris
posted by
Marineair
on August 10, 2008 at 1:58 AM
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Wonderful poem LArry... I
lovedit!
posted by
Sinome
on August 9, 2008 at 11:14 PM
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Love th eimagery and the cadence was superb! Have a great day! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 9, 2008 at 9:04 AM
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