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Purple
Today I found your closing lines a powerful message - sometimes we
are our own worst enemy.
posted by
Troosha
on August 9, 2008 at 9:25 AM
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What a remarkable poem... you rock!
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 9, 2008 at 8:37 AM
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you got a handsome guy's picture........
posted by
Star5_
on August 9, 2008 at 8:30 AM
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I guess I am lost, your poetry, to me has made a change, its too deep
posted by
Lanetay
on August 9, 2008 at 8:08 AM
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Your mind is fantastic. Such revealing imagination!! Thanks.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on August 9, 2008 at 8:00 AM
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Thank you for your comment.
Very great comment, especially the conclusion that man you were describing wasn't the man in the photo staring at the sunset. Great message.
posted by
coolacen
on August 9, 2008 at 6:20 AM
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Very interesting, Purple_Mermaid. I don't give up easily. You never know when I just might make a last ditch effort when everyone thinks I've given up.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 8, 2008 at 10:25 PM
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You never know how strong you are until you carry the weight
posted by
skye08
on August 8, 2008 at 8:48 PM
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This dear, is like Purple
who so beautifully brings out the story of the inner strength of man. I loved it
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 8, 2008 at 7:08 PM
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Re: patman666 dear...
sometimes when we feel surrendering in life's tribulations something inside us refuse to give in...or sometimes we make things harder than it is by complicating them rater than dealing with them, making us more of an enemy to ourselves rather than ally. We can never under estimate what lies within ourselves even if at times we feel there is nothing left in us to work on in life...thank you so much dear patman...it's a privilege to hear from you dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 8, 2008 at 6:17 PM
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It's great, well written but hard to get, especiaasly after the ending.
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 8, 2008 at 5:51 PM
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