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the withered cannot wither for long, enjoy the spectacle all
posted by
Sudanym_
on August 9, 2008 at 6:15 PM
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beware all beware
the cycle of destruction never ends, it's true.
posted by
Luz_Briar
on August 9, 2008 at 6:08 PM
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what treats for the withered you bring
posted by
Smittenheimer
on August 9, 2008 at 11:43 AM
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Pat
A little more focused than your usual eccentricity – but I liked it!
posted by
Troosha
on August 9, 2008 at 9:37 AM
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Very creative Pat. It was a fun read! sam
posted by
sam444
on August 9, 2008 at 8:43 AM
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my friend this is by far one of your best! the first part of your piece pretty much expresses me...Great job! excellent verse!
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 8, 2008 at 5:51 PM
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