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wonderful imagery!
posted by
pelagus
on August 9, 2008 at 3:15 AM
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Lots of imagery in this poem, well done indeed! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on August 8, 2008 at 5:30 PM
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Wow
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on August 8, 2008 at 11:50 AM
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I felt huge compassion in this voice the rest is left unsaid
posted by
Smittenheimer
on August 8, 2008 at 7:48 AM
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Imagery and senses that disturb and make your reader feel the passion. Terrific! 
With TLC, BCA, "Top of the Stairs"
posted by
BC-A
on August 8, 2008 at 6:45 AM
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