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I actually was drawn to stay with it and enjoyed it......but PM is right.....long posts die very quickly....but the serialized version sets the hook, and let's you reel them in.....
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posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on August 8, 2008 at 7:48 AM
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Re: Thanks for the post and the advice
I think I'll take your advice chop up future stories into bite size chunks. Thanks for being so helpful to a new member to the blogit family. Please come back to look at new additions to my blog.
posted by
BahamaDave
on August 8, 2008 at 7:41 AM
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interesting and engaging story dear...it's sad that you dont get much review dear, but very few people around blogit has much time reading long posts such as this and it doesnt mean they dont like it or your work. Normally other writers with long entries like this my friend, they chop it up to short parts and post it one at a time until the last part. Maybe, just maybe you can try it...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 8, 2008 at 1:07 AM
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