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posted by
Star5_
on August 6, 2008 at 9:31 PM
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Hello, Bhaskerji,hamare yahan bhi sawan ka hi mausam hai....."Sawan ka mahena pawan kare shor, jeyarare jhoome re ase jase banwah nachee mor..."apne sawan ki baat ki to yeh khubsurat geet yaad aa gaya.Thanks, for your comment.I wrote this poem in English, so there is no Urdu version, it would have been a pleasure to share it with you, had there been one.
posted by
shamasehar
on August 5, 2008 at 6:38 AM
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Hi dOlly, very, very remarkable. Kya aap iska Urdu version de sakti hai. Can you give me its Urdu version? Shama hai suhana suhana, nashe mein jahaan hai. Kya kuch aisa hi mausam ho raha hai aap ke wahan par?
It's cloudy here in Rajasthan, Jaipur I mean.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on August 4, 2008 at 10:42 PM
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I liked the idea of tread all the way to the end. Fascinating concept! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 31, 2008 at 12:04 PM
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Indeed....the end of one moment of life and the beginning of a new chapter.....a wonderful way to put the end of one thing and the start of another!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 30, 2008 at 7:05 PM
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I particularly like your message in this poem--
and find many points I agree with in your others! Similar themes run through my blogs, too.
posted by
Ciel
on July 30, 2008 at 8:46 AM
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