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Thankfully it doesn't happen often but I've been there. Great poem loved
the imagery and frustrated emotion. Kris
posted by ChristianHorrorWriter on August 2, 2008 at 10:03 PM | | reply |
Awesome
Awesome imagery! I hope you will visit me again soon
posted by HisAngel1981 on July 31, 2008 at 7:33 PM | | reply |
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on August 7, 2008 at 6:33 PM
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oops, I hit enter accidentially before I was done typing..
I pray for blessings to flow your way and that God may give you peace and rest in Him.
Teri
I do have a question, how do you insert graphics and pictures in your writings?
posted by
GoWithTheFlow_Journal
on August 6, 2008 at 10:39 PM
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Poem...
I
posted by
GoWithTheFlow_Journal
on August 6, 2008 at 10:36 PM
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blessiings to you... and i hope love and light comes back in your everyday real soon...
posted by
gold_dust
on August 5, 2008 at 9:53 AM
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I worry about you my dear. Just close your eyes and let God in
you may find yourself able to sleep cradled in his love.
posted by
Kabu
on August 2, 2008 at 6:18 AM
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good writing
....good luck with the sleeping problem
posted by
Samantha39
on August 1, 2008 at 11:53 PM
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My Darling
My darling your words a beautiful.
I hope you get some rest,
I hope it is the best
I will say a prayer or two
Just for you
That you'll pass this test.
Be Blessed
posted by
Color_Your_Life
on August 1, 2008 at 12:47 PM
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Wait a minute!
If the half-sleep produces work like this, maybe you should hold off on the pills.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on July 31, 2008 at 5:23 AM
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No pills while I got BEER! Double shifts got me!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 30, 2008 at 1:31 PM
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Beautiful poem sweet mermaid. I am so sorry you are having trouble sleeping my sweet Jen... perhaps a side effect from one of your medications. I can't imagine it could be anything else. Sweet hearts like you are supposed to sleep well... hmmm I will have to have a talk to the Boss next time I pray. Take care of you. xoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 30, 2008 at 12:44 PM
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Purple
posted by
Troosha
on July 30, 2008 at 10:40 AM
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I can understand
Sleep is a precious commodity that eludes us many nights. A beautiful write that captures the essence of sleepless nights. May you be surrounded by the Light of Love, Peace for your soul and rest for your body.
posted by
skye08
on July 30, 2008 at 9:10 AM
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The sufferer only knows what insomnia is
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 30, 2008 at 5:59 AM
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We should NEVER look back my dear Jen
unless it's on fond memories; excellent work my friend; thank you, take care and God bless always
posted by
mariaki
on July 30, 2008 at 3:40 AM
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You so captured the essence of how some nights we just toss and turn...Wonderful!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 29, 2008 at 11:16 PM
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it is a very good description of how insomnia feels
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 29, 2008 at 10:23 PM
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Hope you will find your pills
Love your description of the dream. No logic, no sense, fragments of our thoughts from the day before.
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 29, 2008 at 9:49 PM
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bad dreams
posted by
Lanetay
on July 29, 2008 at 8:22 PM
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Dear Jen, this touched me... sometimes yes, we don't have to look 'back' --- just forward, straight ahead and seek Peace at the crossroad ~
~ Elyse *thank you for my calling cards Angel. xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on July 29, 2008 at 8:16 PM
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marvelous and beautiful journey - bless you
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 29, 2008 at 6:51 PM
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posted by
yellowrose55
on July 29, 2008 at 6:38 PM
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passion in eventide penned with emotional excellence, love. With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
posted by
BC-A
on July 29, 2008 at 6:38 PM
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Thinking of you
posted by
shelly_b
on July 29, 2008 at 5:59 PM
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This is kind of heartbreaking, Jen.
I have been able to let go of the past.
I hope that you will find your way too.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on July 29, 2008 at 5:53 PM
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posted by
lovelyladymonk
on July 29, 2008 at 5:37 PM
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