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its just like the new song. no air, my friend has jst split from her long term bf and she relates to the song too. keep breathing with or without air!!
posted by
duracell
on July 31, 2008 at 2:56 PM
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this was very song-like. nice
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 31, 2008 at 2:50 PM
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Excellent! I like how you relate the mirror and the door to how another birthday changes you. With TLC, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
posted by
BC-A
on July 29, 2008 at 6:07 AM
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I wish you get blinded by brief moments of happiness more often!! :)
posted by
gold_dust
on July 29, 2008 at 1:33 AM
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