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Le petit mort.
Beautiful and passionate. Very well done. A true poet lives on.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 27, 2008 at 5:37 PM
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Beautiful, Sinome! - Ash :)
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 27, 2008 at 5:24 PM
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Such mastery..Marta I am just awed by this...WOW!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 27, 2008 at 1:57 PM
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Artistry
Thank you for allowing us to share your dreams and "surrender to this feeling of ecstasy"
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 27, 2008 at 1:38 PM
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I agree!
A Poet is definitely born. Totally awesome!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on July 27, 2008 at 12:33 PM
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Your poetry is so wonderful. The French have a saying, the poet is born, not made; nature, not study forms the poet! So much of your work is likened to nature to draw wonderful metaphors. So you got talent my friend. I chose this line to demonstrate what I am saying: only dead could we leave our bodies and experience such pure feeling. Ecstacy in both worlds! That is poetic thinking in its finest hour! ( I told Vicki you were concerned about her, it warmed her heart so. She adores you, me too! ) sam
I know she will be by as soon as she gets some sleep!
posted by
sam444
on July 27, 2008 at 8:56 AM
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The small death...excellent illustration!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 26, 2008 at 9:11 PM
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Wow so passionate just wonderful truly wonderful
posted by
Kabu
on July 26, 2008 at 8:45 PM
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~ Eloquent!!! Just awesome! more than...this is sublime, dear Marta~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 26, 2008 at 6:31 PM
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Yes!
posted by
Nautikos
on July 26, 2008 at 5:37 PM
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I loved being held spellbound, not with an idea, but the voice trying to keep up with itself while trying to keep its head above water, flowing through the torrents of downstream. Yes, yes, yes! And this was my original torrent of faith. Thanks for bringing this back to me.
john
posted by
jfm32
on July 26, 2008 at 2:30 PM
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If I had been a smoker
I would have lit a cigarette right now... very nice
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 26, 2008 at 1:46 PM
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These days I cannot make comments regularly, I feel sorry, excuse me
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 26, 2008 at 12:34 PM
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Wow! I love this poem. I will be back.
Just to let you know Vicki went to a concert with her daughter. She is fine right now, but if they spot a casino on the way home, look out! Love to you sam
posted by
sam444
on July 26, 2008 at 11:55 AM
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