Go to Through Lana's Eyes
- Add a comment
- Go to Love
I like the poem, but I can't seem to latch onto an image:
eg: the little hellos, I love you (and i get the impression of a child)
Then I find "the woman" (and it seems to me middle age)
Your last stanza seems to imply none of the above, but a much older woman.
It seems to be a portrait of something, but I have no idea what it is
posted by
jfm32
on July 26, 2008 at 10:20 AM
| link to this | reply