Go to Everyman's
- Add a comment
- Go to Once Upon A Time
Feels so eerily Medieval to me, as if Darkness wants to rule, but won't. This is so cool!
posted by
yellowrose55
on July 26, 2008 at 8:19 PM
| link to this | reply
Kayzzaman
Anything that begins with "Once upon a time" should continue until "...and they lived happily ever after." At lease in my opinion.
Are you going to add another chapter?
posted by
TAPS.
on July 26, 2008 at 8:00 AM
| link to this | reply
Beautifully expressed! Vivid imagery!
posted by
Ariala
on July 26, 2008 at 5:39 AM
| link to this | reply
christian imagery
great! very urgently expressed. i especially like the first stanza
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 26, 2008 at 1:08 AM
| link to this | reply
Webs of fantasy spreading
Brilliant
posted by
Lotus_Flower
on July 26, 2008 at 12:05 AM
| link to this | reply
I loved this poem Kayzz... Beautifully written Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on July 25, 2008 at 10:50 PM
| link to this | reply
Splendid !
posted by
afzal50
on July 25, 2008 at 10:40 PM
| link to this | reply
posted by
mejustme
on July 25, 2008 at 10:05 PM
| link to this | reply