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Another fine entry Christy ... is he going to deny her existence now?
Your writing is getting better an better, did you know that?  It seems more patient than the first time I read Ben's story - the beginning.  Awesome job sweet friend

posted by VictoriaP on July 27, 2008 at 2:52 PM | link to this | reply

Lady Lady - awesome work with the dialog and characters - and don't forget the visuals - most excellent

posted by Smittenheimer on July 27, 2008 at 2:40 PM | link to this | reply

Keep going, you are doing a fine job!  sam

posted by sam444 on July 25, 2008 at 8:55 AM | link to this | reply

Christy
Great to see you writing and doing such a good job of it luv

posted by WileyJohn on July 24, 2008 at 9:01 PM | link to this | reply

Very interesting story :-)  I have been reading it all along and I really like where you are taking it.  I also saw the post on finding your son.  Good for you!  I hope you wrote him.  Good luck with that

posted by Sinome2 on July 24, 2008 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply