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You write on Marion!!~ Your heart is so purely rich and your pen speaks volumes ~
Elyse *miss you xoxox
posted by
elysianfields
on July 26, 2008 at 10:08 PM
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Thank you all for the wonderful comments...
I am heading off to work soon, so I am sorry that I could not thank each one of you personally...Hope you all have a great day!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 25, 2008 at 11:51 AM
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Excellent! Your words open up the skies with lightning and thunder of realization about our own lives love. lol, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”
posted by
BC-A
on July 25, 2008 at 5:39 AM
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Voices
Wow Marion! This is powerful stuff. Such feeling. Such passion. I know that you are a great writer, but you continually amaze me with the depth and vision that you show in your work. No smart ass father/daughter comments tonight. However, you mother may ask you about the Voices. Its just your muse talking, right. Not actual voices. Do we need to talk? Seriously, a very wonderful poem.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 24, 2008 at 9:25 PM
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Wow Marion... totally awesome poem. I loved the painful beginning and the hope that lifts it at the end. Amazing my friend, Both you and your father have totally diffeerent styles but you are two of the most talented poets I have had the pleasure of reading. Bravo!!!
posted by
Sinome2
on July 24, 2008 at 8:44 PM
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Definitely amazing!
Love the way you write.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on July 24, 2008 at 8:43 PM
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Hi ducky great to read you're still writing amazing poetry.
posted by
Kabu
on July 24, 2008 at 8:29 PM
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Our minds, hearts, and souls are intriguing pieces of determination aren't they?
fantastic piece!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 24, 2008 at 7:06 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on July 24, 2008 at 6:24 PM
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Beautifully done my dear
Thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 24, 2008 at 6:13 AM
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Superb poem !
posted by
afzal50
on July 24, 2008 at 3:27 AM
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Splendid!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 24, 2008 at 12:54 AM
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Now there is something to celebrate! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 23, 2008 at 11:30 PM
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