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beckoned
you have the most amazing soul - bright and glaring - shades required - let the heat enter
"Sunrise sunset shimmering glistening bestowed beckoning..."
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 26, 2008 at 10:15 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on July 24, 2008 at 6:21 PM
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find out how it REALLY works. Yea, but do i give the impression i've never tried? Too hard too long.
posted by
Sudanym_
on July 24, 2008 at 7:16 AM
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Awesome job...
I felt like it was getting a little long, but I loved the closing. Nice one! - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 23, 2008 at 7:39 PM
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..p.s...there's really no point...is there?...in listening to any of 'them'...cause all they ever tell us is bullshit...well, maybe there is some point to PRETENDING to listen...for a while...for a purpose...like maybe a degree or license or a paycheck...yeah...a paycheck would be nice...'cause then you can buy beer...and maybe even chips....or something...but that is just utilitarian and makes sense (self-interest) but, no point in REALLY listening...is there?....just go discovering and find out...or not...could just keep doing the status quo...oh...and i am dead fucking serious...i am almost always dead fucking serious even when i am dead fucking joking...doesn't mean i don't mean it...even when i am 'joking'....which i am not doing at the moment...moon
posted by
magic_moon
on July 23, 2008 at 6:40 PM
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...since nothing works the way it is 'supposed' to...and since everything that we're told is a lie...which it is...wouldn't it be interesting to find out how it REALLY works...and why? moon
posted by
magic_moon
on July 23, 2008 at 6:35 PM
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