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Yes, And it hurts bad!
joe
posted by
LongoGeremia
on July 23, 2008 at 11:30 AM
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Beautiful. Finale is a superb title.
"there is no harsher tone/Than/ I could never want you as my own" Truth to relate to I am sure. 
posted by
merkie
on July 23, 2008 at 8:50 AM
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From beginning to end, this was so well written. The composition was impeccable. Nicely done...
- Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 23, 2008 at 12:04 AM
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