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I am a genie! Too precious! I found this line:
if that darned moment had not left in an instant of time; what a revelation for me. Although in this exquisite imagery; it just fits so many situations. The imagery was so captivating. I just love reading first and then come back and look at it from the aspect of what the poem has to offer. This is fabulous. sam
I am off to the next poem for my imagery fix.
posted by
sam444
on July 22, 2008 at 6:40 PM
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what a No Title wonder you have here- your pen writes with a flow and ease that creates sensations in the mind of your fans.
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 22, 2008 at 5:49 PM
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Beautiful, Sinome!
I can somewhat relate.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on July 22, 2008 at 5:40 PM
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Thank you Sam genie :-) you know what they say...GMTA... I missed you tons... Thanks for everything.
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 12:10 PM
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Thank you Jen, I am happy to be back and in working order :-). I missed you too . Thank you
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 12:09 PM
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Thank you so much Teddy
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 12:08 PM
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Re: Well done!
Thanks Henry...your too kind
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 12:08 PM
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Re: Not only awesome, but..............
Thank you Kolekshuns so much
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 12:08 PM
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Re: unforgetable moments (as opposed to regretable), play hell on our
Yes we might not regret them but to forget them ...not that easy... Thank you Vicki for everything :-)
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 12:07 PM
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Thank you MAx :-)
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 12:06 PM
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Re: Lovely as always, Sinome, welcome back :)! - Ash
Thank you Ash...I am glad to be back, I missed you all,
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 12:06 PM
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I missed you too Mindy... I did read while away but I could not comment ...so I am trying to catch up. Thank you for your kindness and for caring so much :-)
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 12:05 PM
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Thank you desert prince... you are too kind
and
right back at you :-)
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 12:03 PM
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Thank you RomaKay...
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 12:02 PM
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Re: Tough spot to be in, Sinome...
Thank you Charles... I am more awake and aware now... the tough spot is in the past. You are sweet to care. Thanks
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 12:01 PM
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Afzal thank you so much.
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 12:00 PM
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Re: Beautiful and intense Sinome
Thank you Maria :-) you are sweet. God Bless you too.
posted by
Sinome
on July 22, 2008 at 12:00 PM
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Beautiful and intense Sinome
a superb comeback piece for sure! Thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 22, 2008 at 5:30 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on July 22, 2008 at 5:29 AM
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Tough spot to be in, Sinome...
...but, time has a way of working things out, for better or worse...hopefully better, of course.
I dig this poem like I dig all of your poetry, Sinome.
posted by
metalrat
on July 21, 2008 at 8:54 PM
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beautiful.
posted by
RomaKay
on July 21, 2008 at 8:18 PM
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Marta, my ocen-kissed princess, I was so touched by the ring of truth in your last lines ........"a moment she does not regret
but perhaps she wishes she could forget", that I just forgot myself for quite a while. I just wonder from where does my wannabe poetess brings out these beauties? .
the desert prince send his and affection
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 21, 2008 at 8:00 PM
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First off: WHERE have you been young lady??? Don't think none of us noticed you were gone, because we did!!!!!!!!
LOL.
I missed you and your lovely poetry. Now I'm happy. 
Secondly - Such a beautiful poem! It was heart rendering in the end, but we all have to keep those kinds of memories hidden because they can't be forgotten, don't we?
posted by
NiteTide
on July 21, 2008 at 7:48 PM
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Lovely as always, Sinome, welcome back :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 21, 2008 at 7:29 PM
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posted by
contagion_publishing
on July 21, 2008 at 7:25 PM
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unforgetable moments (as opposed to regretable), play hell on our
day to day sometimes, don't they... you just have to smile and put them back in your pocket... hugs sweet one
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 21, 2008 at 6:59 PM
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Not only awesome, but..............
.......totally awesome! Love it!
posted by
Kolekshuns
on July 21, 2008 at 6:58 PM
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Well done!
Awsome write Kiddo!! You're not so bad you're self!! Keep that pen moving!!
posted by
Hank29
on July 21, 2008 at 4:43 PM
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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 21, 2008 at 3:44 PM
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welcome back my beloved sinome....and welcome back to your ever inspiring and sincere pieces....sorry if you dont/wont hear much from me. My silent calling cards will tell you how much you mean to me dear...
posted by
__Purple_Mermaid11__
on July 21, 2008 at 3:42 PM
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Hello Sinome! I feel like a genie! I was just at your blog looking for you! I saw you came to see me. I have missed you so as well! I stole this read for myself as per my previous comment. I just want to bask in the imagery. I will be back! Hope all is well. Love to you and my blessings. sam
posted by
sam444
on July 21, 2008 at 3:33 PM
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