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Jen ...this poem was so worth coming back for, actually all the poems I have read this afternoon so far are magnificent... I am in awe of all and specially of you my sweet mermaid for I know you dwell in pain and your courage inspires me so.
" The sordid sepia lurks before my eyes, certain that even from a distant mile they will prop my heart, as they have, in the darkest hue of my past"... that is so amazinly well expressed, so beautifully written. Take care of you darlin' I will speak with you soon.
posted by
Sinome
on July 21, 2008 at 3:53 PM
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Compelling poem, Mermaid...
...with an excellent moral at the end. Well done!
posted by
metalrat
on July 21, 2008 at 3:24 PM
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I love what i read from you. such heart and genius with words
posted by
Jeffepic
on July 21, 2008 at 3:11 PM
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Still lovely, though sad, Jen!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on July 21, 2008 at 10:40 AM
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Purple
Sometimes it's best not to look back... nicely done!
posted by
Troosha
on July 21, 2008 at 9:30 AM
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great work my dear blogit friend. Be careful reposting they suspended my use on blogit for reposting my works calling it spamming so be careful there is a rat here on blogit.
posted by
spinner
on July 21, 2008 at 8:41 AM
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There is such raw emotion here...Just open and waiting to be felt..WOW!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 20, 2008 at 11:54 PM
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Such beauty but with so much pain. Lovely.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 20, 2008 at 10:05 PM
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Yes, it's very true !
posted by
afzal50
on July 20, 2008 at 9:28 PM
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So sad, Jen...
Better times ahead, I hope
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on July 20, 2008 at 8:26 PM
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Fantastic read, Mermaid!
I love the line, "They fall in line waylaying for renaissance..." So well put.
- Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 20, 2008 at 6:56 PM
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seems like a day to reflect on the past
posted by
Lanetay
on July 20, 2008 at 6:40 PM
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