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Hey Ex Turpi, Thanks for taking the to read and comment on my poem. Later, Marty
posted by
marty1947
on July 21, 2008 at 8:53 AM
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This is revealing and instructive. Beautifully crafted.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on July 21, 2008 at 8:33 AM
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Re: This was so tragic and yet so beautifully paced and worded...
Hey Chris, I've moved on since write'n that poem but I don't think you ever shake it all off. When you're betrayed and hurt by someone you loved and trusted for 25 years it don't all go away. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Later, Marty
posted by
marty1947
on July 20, 2008 at 7:25 PM
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This was so tragic and yet so beautifully paced and worded...
I hope that you continue to find solace in your writing (I know that I have) and I wish you luck as you continue forward...
- Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 20, 2008 at 6:39 PM
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Re: Ouch
Hey Shams, Just want to say thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Later, Marty
posted by
marty1947
on July 20, 2008 at 4:25 PM
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Ouch
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on July 20, 2008 at 2:46 PM
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Re: Marty
Hey Troosha, Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. God Bless, Marty
posted by
marty1947
on July 20, 2008 at 12:58 PM
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Marty
Sad - but very well done. Your emotion and pain was felt.
posted by
Troosha
on July 20, 2008 at 12:50 PM
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