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                You are a great poet!  
                
                    posted by
                    Smittenheimer
                     on July 20, 2008 at 2:42 PM
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                    When desperation is crossing the ...
                
                ... borders - the surrender is complete - and it's time for rest ...  
                
                    posted by
                    ggXpress
                     on July 20, 2008 at 12:50 PM
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                    Profound !
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    afzal50
                     on July 19, 2008 at 9:38 PM
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         Similarly to how we hang on to your words, hang in there love, lol, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”           
      
                
                    posted by
                    BC-A
                     on July 19, 2008 at 8:42 PM
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                    you are always beautiful writer
                
                    
  
                
                    posted by
                    Star5_
                     on July 19, 2008 at 8:16 PM
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                    Awesome Jen....
                
                Such powerful emotion 




  
                
                    posted by
                    Afzal_Sunny7
                     on July 19, 2008 at 6:28 PM
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                you've certainly found your niche in poetry.



also, you choose great pictures to enhance the mood as well.  
                
                    posted by
                    Luz_Briar
                     on July 19, 2008 at 6:03 PM
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                heartbreaking....

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                    posted by
                    NiteTide
                     on July 19, 2008 at 5:47 PM
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                    Beautiful as always, J!
                
                    
    
    
  
                
                    posted by
                    teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
                     on July 19, 2008 at 5:42 PM
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