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You are a great poet!

posted by Smittenheimer on July 20, 2008 at 2:42 PM | link to this | reply

When desperation is crossing the ...
... borders - the surrender is complete - and it's time for rest ...

posted by ggXpress on July 20, 2008 at 12:50 PM | link to this | reply

Profound !

posted by afzal50 on July 19, 2008 at 9:38 PM | link to this | reply

 Similarly to how we hang on to your words, hang in there love, lol, BCA, “Top of the Stairs”

posted by BC-A on July 19, 2008 at 8:42 PM | link to this | reply

you are always beautiful writer

posted by Star5_ on July 19, 2008 at 8:16 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome Jen....
Such powerful emotion

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on July 19, 2008 at 6:28 PM | link to this | reply

you've certainly found your niche in poetry.also, you choose great pictures to enhance the mood as well.

posted by Luz_Briar on July 19, 2008 at 6:03 PM | link to this | reply

heartbreaking..........

posted by NiteTide on July 19, 2008 at 5:47 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful as always, J!

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on July 19, 2008 at 5:42 PM | link to this | reply