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one word: goosebumps
posted by
lionreign
on July 20, 2008 at 10:37 AM
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......as I couldnot say in words all that I wanted to.
posted by
shamasehar
on July 20, 2008 at 2:19 AM
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I am with my Dad and Mindy on this one...I can't wait for more!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 19, 2008 at 11:42 PM
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Endgame: Severance
I agree with Mindy. As I was reading the poem, I kept thinking about commenting on a certain passage, but the great lines and thoughts just kept on coming. So I am commenting on the whole poem. This is very well said, and needs to be thought upon often.
Joe 
posted by
SFJoseph
on July 19, 2008 at 9:07 PM
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Dammit, you've done it. I friggin' LOVE this poem. Every time I was about tell you how much I loved a certain line, another one took my interest...and it kept going until I was at the end and I realized I enjoyed the whole damn thing. This poem, by itself, was amazing. WOW.
posted by
NiteTide
on July 19, 2008 at 5:46 PM
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Chris
There were so many great...great...great lines in that! a very dismantling and moving,prolific, and initiating poem that gripped me. There
is a great "Severence" that divides our wisdom. Your words provoke, a want to change. And a desire to brake down that barrier.
posted by
Kobriel
on July 19, 2008 at 4:46 PM
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