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                It's fascinating to bear your soul; and then be made whole. Good writing.  
                
                    posted by
                    EX_TURPI
                     on July 18, 2008 at 7:54 AM
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                    I don't normally get pulled into such long posts...
                
                but you got me.  This is almost a short story of sorts, and I loved every word! - Chris  
                
                    posted by
                    Marineair
                     on July 17, 2008 at 8:53 PM
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                    Wonderful 
                
                Very intriguing dialog, In between poetry and alliteration   
  
                
                    posted by
                    Smittenheimer
                     on July 17, 2008 at 6:10 PM
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