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Very nice work
Thank you so much.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on July 16, 2008 at 8:42 PM
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Splendid !
posted by
afzal50
on July 16, 2008 at 8:22 PM
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Reminds me of a bad trip during my adolescence.
Keep on truckin on, dude!
posted by
WindTapper
on July 16, 2008 at 7:11 PM
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Spirits good will answer you!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 16, 2008 at 3:21 PM
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VERY cool writing...
Nice job!
- Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 16, 2008 at 2:44 PM
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I like the idea of metamorphasizing
into nothingness because I have no words
to spare.
posted by
Winged
on July 16, 2008 at 1:25 PM
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Brilliant .. nothing else with do this justice.
posted by
Angesom_AG
on July 16, 2008 at 12:39 PM
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Kayzzaman-every second of every minute of every hour of every day-is
different.I LOVE this poem! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 16, 2008 at 12:33 PM
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Startling...
Great writing- kind of shocking in a good way. Certainly grabs the attention! Keep writing!
Hobbitgirl
posted by
Hobbitgirl
on July 16, 2008 at 9:13 AM
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I love this one- do you submit your work to magazines also? (you should
)
posted by
mejustme
on July 16, 2008 at 7:11 AM
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Kayzz..!
Prolific writing here! Kinda twisted too ( I mean that in a good way)
posted by
Kobriel
on July 16, 2008 at 6:22 AM
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no 2 days are ever alike
posted by
Lanetay
on July 16, 2008 at 5:59 AM
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