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Re: Elyse
Thank you soo much for introducing me to this form..Much love to you..Hope all is well..
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 16, 2008 at 11:45 PM
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Re: Ash
Thank you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 16, 2008 at 11:44 PM
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Re: NiteTide
Thank you for the great words of praise..I am so pleased that you enjoyed..
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 16, 2008 at 11:44 PM
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Re: Smittenheimer
So glad this write could let you remember such a great memory..Thank you for stopping in it is great to meet you..Oh and thanks for the stars..
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 16, 2008 at 11:43 PM
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Re: Bhaskar.ing
Hello my mentor..thank you for coming by, Sorry the picture didn't download the first time...
love to your desert sands..
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 16, 2008 at 11:42 PM
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Re: Kayzzaman, Teddy, Nataluna, Afzal, Saul, and Scramble
Thank you all for the great comments..It is great to see you!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 16, 2008 at 11:40 PM
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Re: Vickip
I found the form really fun...you really should try it sometime..There are only three numbers 5 for the first line, 7 for the next and 7 more for the last..A total of 19 syllables..I have faith that you can do it! Thank you for coming by..
Chey says hi again!
posted by
Wigopa_
on July 16, 2008 at 11:37 PM
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Love the pic ~ and the Dodoitsu form is perfect---- imagery and poetry is awesome!!!~
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 16, 2008 at 8:46 PM
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Cute & pretty indeed..like u :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 16, 2008 at 8:10 PM
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What a fascinating write!!! And the picture just enhances every single word you wrote!! Beautiful!
posted by
NiteTide
on July 16, 2008 at 4:23 PM
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OMG
This is quite striking. It recalled a memory when my late g-dad told me he caught a huge manta ray while fishing in a 14 foot boat. He when he finally (after 3 hours) got it close enough to identify he let it go, he said the thing was longer than his boat and this photo shows one about the size he described. Fascinating
posted by
Smittenheimer
on July 16, 2008 at 2:37 PM
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Wonderful wigopa! What a perfect combination! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 16, 2008 at 1:03 PM
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Very nice...
posted by
saul_relative
on July 16, 2008 at 6:26 AM
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Amazing pic !
posted by
afzal50
on July 16, 2008 at 4:22 AM
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Marion, now i can see the awesome pic
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 16, 2008 at 2:45 AM
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Although I couldn't see the picture
I loved the poem; thank you and God bless my friend
posted by
mariaki
on July 16, 2008 at 1:54 AM
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Beautiful picture, wigopa. I had to research dodoitsu poems as I know nothing of that poetic form. Interesting!
posted by
TAPS.
on July 16, 2008 at 12:22 AM
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Love it!
posted by
Nataluna
on July 16, 2008 at 12:08 AM
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Wonderful...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on July 15, 2008 at 11:30 PM
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Hi Delta, coudn't see the pic of the aquatic creatures, will come again and also read the long write just prior to this one.
to you prairie home tents
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on July 15, 2008 at 10:20 PM
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Excellent, Marion
posted by
Kayzzaman
on July 15, 2008 at 10:13 PM
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I love this form ... I really like the challenge of so much meaning in
so few words. Say hello to your daughter .. I'm keeping my eye out for another picture.
posted by
VictoriaP
on July 15, 2008 at 9:35 PM
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