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Wonderful read!
VERY nicely put together. Write on! - Chris
posted by
Marineair
on July 15, 2008 at 6:53 PM
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Wonderful satire on old notions!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 15, 2008 at 3:21 PM
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this could be read to light, unearthy music
OR without, and both times the effect would be great. other-worldly
posted by
Luz_Briar
on July 15, 2008 at 2:29 PM
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Absolutely Beautiful Kayzzaman! Wonderful read! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on July 15, 2008 at 12:40 PM
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Kazzyman ,,,
Excellent!
posted by
jacentaOld
on July 15, 2008 at 10:32 AM
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What a beautifully stark and poignant allegory of the ascent...
...from the primal ooze to the Fall in the Garden. Gripping!
posted by
metalrat
on July 15, 2008 at 9:48 AM
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Kazzyman
This is some good work.
posted by
Justi
on July 15, 2008 at 9:40 AM
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Kz, your poetry always sounds so mystical, it's a pleasure :)! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on July 15, 2008 at 9:12 AM
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and you have written somthing superb. Wonderful
posted by
Kabu
on July 15, 2008 at 8:05 AM
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Superb work my friend!
thank you and God bless
posted by
mariaki
on July 15, 2008 at 7:37 AM
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Great imaging, arousing...
posted by
Winged
on July 15, 2008 at 6:04 AM
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What a powerful and excellent write here Kayzza~ This is stunning!~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on July 15, 2008 at 5:54 AM
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